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After `Synfull commented on my shading and the eyes on , I revamped it. This is the result.

Hand pixeled with 18 colors including transparency.

Enjoy!
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

All right, you totally know that I'm not an emotoconist... So don't look to closely at the ratings, I have no idea how I should rate something like technique when I have no idea what I'm talking about.
I like the way the emote seems to totally not notice that the drool is dropping down and how it seems to stare at me smiling.
The shading is so much smoother than in the first version and the eyes are far more visible, so that's really good.
But I was wondering why the amount of drool wouldn't grow as there is a constant dripping in but not dripping out of the puddle. Maybe make it continue do flow somewhere or make the emote drown in it's own drool?
And I just had an idea come to me. Maybe the emote should blink the eyes, a bit as if it wasn't believing that a thing this good could exist.