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A little fish I made. I was trying to get the gradient shaded look to my hand pixeled emoticons, and this is the result. I hope you enjoy it!

48 frames, each at 7/100 of a second.

If you want to use this on a website you have, let me know before you do it, and link back to me, okay? :aww:

Enjoy!

Critiques


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I like the shading a lot (though if I were you, I'd shade the outline too if you could). :la:
You did a great job on it.
The fin animation is great; I like that a lot. :aww:
The shape of the fish is also great.

The bubble animation is a bith strange, maybe make them go left/right more instead of a pixel a piece? It looks a bit choppy--same with the gills.
I'd also make it blink and have it open his mouth as the bubbles come out.
And it's a bith weird how the tail doesn't move at all.
One more thing I'd do is add a second outline (not as dark as the one surrounding the fish, but hard enough for it to be distinctive) to separate the main part of the body from lower fins/upper fins, so the shape of the actual fish is a bit more distinctive. :nod:

Good job so far, just a few kinks. :salute:
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oooh very cool. I love how the gills move!

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