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A little fish I made. I was trying to get the gradient shaded look to my hand pixeled emoticons, and this is the result. I hope you enjoy it!

48 frames, each at 7/100 of a second.

If you want to use this on a website you have, let me know before you do it, and link back to me, okay? :aww:

Enjoy!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I like the shading a lot (though if I were you, I'd shade the outline too if you could). <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la" />
You did a great job on it.
The fin animation is great; I like that a lot. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww" />
The shape of the fish is also great.

The bubble animation is a bith strange, maybe make them go left/right more instead of a pixel a piece? It looks a bit choppy--same with the gills.
I'd also make it blink and have it open his mouth as the bubbles come out.
And it's a bith weird how the tail doesn't move at all.
One more thing I'd do is add a second outline (not as dark as the one surrounding the fish, but hard enough for it to be distinctive) to separate the main part of the body from lower fins/upper fins, so the shape of the actual fish is a bit more distinctive. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod" />

Good job so far, just a few kinks. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="26" height="18" alt=":salute:" title="I salute you!" />