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Critiques
You did a great job on it.
The fin animation is great; I like that a lot.
The shape of the fish is also great.
The bubble animation is a bith strange, maybe make them go left/right more instead of a pixel a piece? It looks a bit choppy--same with the gills.
I'd also make it blink and have it open his mouth as the bubbles come out.
And it's a bith weird how the tail doesn't move at all.
One more thing I'd do is add a second outline (not as dark as the one surrounding the fish, but hard enough for it to be distinctive) to separate the main part of the body from lower fins/upper fins, so the shape of the actual fish is a bit more distinctive.
Good job so far, just a few kinks.
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