i really love it vision idk cuz its not a picture very original never heard anything like it your technique is good you dont always have to feel like your rhyming n you gonna let the words jist flow, i like that impact is BIG because it makes you think i see alot of people in the comments are like "huh?" or "i dont get it? what?" and then a few ppl DO get it and think its beautiful i mean if not everyone gets it its a THINKER witch always makes for a better poem
i like a nice original, well peice that makes you think you did that 4 me n i dont like potry but its simple and beautiful
vision idk cuz its not a picture
very original never heard anything like it
your technique is good you dont always have to feel like your rhyming n you gonna let the words jist flow, i like that
impact is BIG because it makes you think
i see alot of people in the comments are like "huh?" or "i dont get it? what?" and then a few ppl DO get it and think its beautiful
i mean if not everyone gets it its a THINKER witch always makes for a better poem
i like a nice original, well peice that makes you think
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